I think that there isn't a beast. Sam and Eric just let a noise get to their head. They were over exaggerating. They are young it's was still dark. But I am a little nervous even though I don't think that there is a beastie. They did seem pretty scared. I feel like people are showing me less respect as their leader. Ralph is trying to take over in a way. The rest of the kids are following his bad influence. Not that they are told about the beastie everyone is in sort of a panic mode. It makes me feel uncomfortable because people are looking at me for the answers. I feel like I am in charge of the boys saftey. If someone gets hurt it's all my fault. Some times I don't like being the leader because you can't really have fun. You always have to worry about what other kids are doing. I feel so unfortunate for ending up on this island.
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This is very good. It's details and even though it doesn't say so, I can tell whose perspective it's in. I think that something you can work on is writing a little more.
I think this is good but you need to checck it over alittle bit like when you said Ralph is trying to take over in a way. I think you meant jack because you are ralph but anyway i think this was very good
Pretty good Hatch, but you need to tell everyone the chapter name, who you are and the bookname as your title. great detail, and you explained everything pretty well, but as ryan said there are a few areas that need to be expanded. This will make your post a little bit longer which is always good.
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